| 2006-02-09 20:43:19 |
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wtf thats not all of it! |
| 2006-02-12 04:26:07 |
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Ryan, it is very obvious that you dropped out of kindergarten because you can't even spell as well as a grade schooler might. And never mind your writing style. Lord, does it ever suck. Don't quit your day job --- if you have one. 0/10 for this one. |
| 2006-02-12 08:54:25 |
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where' the rest ifyou can't tell leave her to me.FUCK YOU |
| 2006-02-13 20:18:42 |
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Where do you get off telling people to fuck off if they do not like your stories? If we dont like 'em dont read 'em? It does not work that way sparky. You post the stories and we read them. This one sucked. First, learn what a paragraph is, then try structuring you sentences a teeny bit. This sucked the first time you posted it and you have actually made it even more illegible. If I thought you were smart enough to cook meth, I would figure thats what you were smoking when you wrote this. However, I have my doubts you could cook meth without blowing yourself up (feel free to try and prove me wrong if you want). This story makes no sense at all, try again. |
| 2006-02-13 20:30:37 |
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Hey give Ryan a break ! OK the grammar and spelling are not perfect I grant you. However he has fashioned a credible story with word pictures which you can really "see" and "feel". What more do you want ? |