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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-10-25 09:56:04 | The Maid Shift -Complete Story- | like everyone says - where is the rest of the story - has the making of a very good story |
| 2008-02-02 02:46:49 | The Maid Shift -Complete Story- | U rok dude FUCK THEM |
| 2006-02-12 17:18:17 | She was 34, I was 22 | Learn to spell, it's laid, not layed. It's comments, not coments. It's lube, not loob. u need to spend more time w/ your writing, the descriptions of the action sucked. |
| 2006-02-12 17:38:43 | She was 34, I was 22 | The Dick Slapper means no harm when he says you should stop writing and maybe become one of the great bus drivers of all time. Your story was so childishly written that it defies description. You're in bad need of grammar lessons. 2/10 |
| 2006-02-13 13:48:15 | She was 34, I was 22 | WHERE'S ALL THE DETAIL. THAT STORY SUCKED. |