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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2005-12-11 22:39:02 | Nurses Prison Riot Ordeal | this just proves not only men get raped in jail Kick ass story man |
2005-12-12 08:41:44 | Nurses Prison Riot Ordeal | Decent idea, but grammar and sentence structure work would greatly improve the story. in my opinion, everything ended too abruptly and the story was left hanging; some words seemed to be left out or were substituted by incorrect words. those are all easy problems to solve, there is potential here 2/10 |
2005-12-12 14:12:56 | Nurses Prison Riot Ordeal | Look Finc maybe OOg would rather be your slave ... OOg man get off his jock there are real women in line here... fantastic story looking forward to more |
2005-12-15 12:58:42 | Nurses Prison Riot Ordeal | to much left hanging but a decent story a little bit more focous on the grammer and a little more to it would get the 10 but for now 7 |
2005-12-15 13:52:42 | Nurses Prison Riot Ordeal | story sucked ass 2/10 |