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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-12-15 14:11:29 | AT THE GYM_(1) | Definitely a respectable attempt. The action is good, though the description is a little hit-and-miss. For example, the initial seduction in the locker room is too abrupt in description as well as in pacing. There wasn't enough written about that for it to suit a stranger, let alone an old friend/fuckbuddy. |
| 2005-12-15 15:32:21 | AT THE GYM_(1) | Learn to spell check dammit!!!! good story anyways |
| 2005-12-15 21:20:25 | AT THE GYM_(1) | U gotta 1 for refusing to proofread your good story. I think u were typing too fast. Slow down, good writing, like good sex takes time. r |
| 2006-03-29 18:36:43 | AT THE GYM_(1) | crap! |
| 2006-11-13 08:33:29 | AT THE GYM_(1) | good tey |