| 2005-12-17 22:37:54 |
Paradise Mum
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very good story but overly long |
| 2005-12-18 07:44:13 |
Paradise Mum
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that has been one of the best story's i have read in a year or longer. 10/10 |
| 2005-12-18 14:28:25 |
Paradise Mum
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That was a great story, you did a great job making it seem real and very erotic. It was a little too long and should have been broken down into smaller stories but it was good. The only complaint is getting the mother pregnant. Having sex is one thing but the whole "pregnant" thing is way to much. I'd still have to say 10/10 though!!! |
| 2005-12-18 16:20:11 |
Paradise Mum
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This is one of the better stories on this damn site, the only ones that compete are Anal threesome 1,2&3 and the camp nurse. I give this outstanding story an 11 out of 10. |
| 2005-12-18 18:23:37 |
Paradise Mum
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Dah sounds like the retarded child that might come from the pregnancy! Who's he talking to? - himself? |