| 2005-12-23 12:07:54 |
Paradise Mum
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Too Long 1/10 |
| 2005-12-24 05:36:42 |
Paradise Mum
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great story but in end bit bored over all nice stroy,9/10. |
| 2005-12-24 19:35:40 |
Paradise Mum
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see the reason why i dont like stories that are too long (and i find that many would agree with me) is that when ya wank during the dam story u cum hardly when the fucking begins jesus i loved the story but it had too much non sex that it looks like it shud be on a womans weekly magazine over all 7/10 |
| 2005-12-24 21:49:21 |
Paradise Mum
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great story I loved all of it!!!! More Please!!! |
| 2005-12-25 01:30:21 |
Paradise Mum
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yo great story great i wanna see how the baby turns out...but good writing keep it up a 10 for ya |