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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-12-14 20:18:25 | The weirdest date | Jesus, what a gang of critics. I liked your story fine despite some confusion -- my brother's mother not my mother too? Keep at it, you'll learn as you go. |
| 2005-12-15 00:34:08 | The weirdest date | So much is good, but so much is bad. First off, it's half a story. If he'd creamed in his jeans, there would have been a little bit more of an idea of an end. As it is, you stopped right after the foreplay. Part two is required. Perhaps, when you post it, you can repost this introduction along with it. Please use spell check, proof read your work, and make sure all of your words actually make sense. I've read some gibberish on this site, and this not that bad. If you use capitalization and good spelling, your stories should be quite enjoyable. I really like the lead up and the clumsy and awkward experimentation. I can believe this is a true story so far because you capture that eager uncertainty, and the thrill of discovery. Good first try. I hope you contribute some more. Thanks. |
| 2005-12-15 07:43:47 | The weirdest date | do'nt worry about the bad comments just keep writing. rule of thumb one fuck scene per story. |
| 2005-12-15 12:41:30 | The weirdest date | a 14-year old living apart from his brother in his own house ? and the 12-year old living alone too ? |
| 2005-12-15 13:16:44 | The weirdest date | it wasn't bad...ignore them |