| 2006-07-11 11:50:33 |
The weirdest date
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It was good for a first story dude. It was exciting and I'm really wanting to read the next one. |
| 2006-10-14 21:13:48 |
The weirdest date
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semi believable, semi wet dreamed up by the plder brother. written under promise of death by the younger one. (who promises ti get even with his kind of a rat bro) |
| 2006-11-06 23:38:14 |
The weirdest date
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needs many many details to make it understandable but with practice you might be able to write it better. liked the story line though. |
| 2005-12-13 16:01:03 |
Seduced by Feet - pt 3
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1/10 |
| 2005-12-13 16:49:52 |
Seduced by Feet - pt 3
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Not into feet. Love pussy. |