| 2006-01-01 16:56:05 |
The Car Deal/ PT2/ Time to trade up!
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Run of the mill. 4/10. Last paragraph is a massive runon sentence typfies writing style. |
| 2006-07-21 02:17:32 |
The Car Deal/ PT2/ Time to trade up!
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a rush job of a story. You pressed for time? |
| 2006-09-11 21:18:47 |
The Car Deal/ PT2/ Time to trade up!
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yo dawg these niggas dont know what they talkin bout that was fuckin sexy 10/10 |
| 2005-12-17 08:55:23 |
The Beat
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bot bad pretty cool |
| 2005-12-17 10:34:49 |
The Beat
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SHIIIIT! FUCKING GREAT STORY! You are one hell of a writer. We need more of this stuff here! |