| 2005-12-17 17:23:06 |
The Beat
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Hey guys, glad you enjoyed it! Just a couple things, you might notice the thoughts of the characters might seem out of place, this is becuase in the original version the characters thoughts were in italics and special formatting doesnt translate to this site, making some of it read kind of weird. In any case, keep the comments coming! |
| 2005-12-19 00:58:41 |
The Beat
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Beautifully written, excellent imagery, the entire thing was very well done. I don't usually leave comments but this one has compelled me to do so. Excellent vocabulary and well assembled. There's alot of shit on this site, good to know someone can find gold. Keep up the kickass writing! |
| 2005-12-19 14:26:03 |
The Beat
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wonderful...you should consider getting published...i'd buy your books ;) |
| 2006-01-01 02:37:52 |
The Beat
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good story! |
| 2006-01-06 16:42:42 |
The Beat
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fucking good and i usaly dont comment and man its could be true |