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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-12-22 13:05:24 | The Builder | very good story...you should think about making it longer and trying to publish...you have talent...keep going 9/10 (-1 for spelling only) |
| 2005-12-22 13:57:46 | The Builder | Good story but use ass your writing a porn story your allowd to use ass : ) . Cant wait for the next one |
| 2005-12-23 08:15:18 | The Builder | It was a good story, but really, your spelling is R.E.D.I.C.U.L.O.U.S. |
| 2005-12-23 13:08:51 | The Builder | Good story. Moved along at a good pace. You could use more discription on the sex. thank you |
| 2005-12-23 21:53:53 | The Builder | I thought it was great a little more discription about the sex. When you get done with Andy give me a call i love to do ya smile.... |