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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-11-01 03:13:35 | daddy's bad girl_(0) | There's nothing I can say that others haven't already said. |
| 2006-11-17 01:28:59 | daddy's bad girl_(0) | Good story, does need some touch up work but the main idea is good. Would be great to hear another chapter. |
| 2007-01-11 22:03:47 | daddy's bad girl_(0) | its ok but hard to read good job tho 7/10 |
| 2007-02-20 16:05:53 | daddy's bad girl_(0) | It's all great besides for: the horrid ending, lack of spelling, lack of punctuation, lack of capitilazation, and well really, lack of sense all together. You wrote your "story" in fragments and run ons without punctuation, and it's shameful to even call this a story. By the way, Have you ever heard of paragraphs? |
| 2007-04-11 00:32:34 | daddy's bad girl_(0) | That was good just need to fix it and correct your spelling but on tope of that it was nice I love bondage stories |