| 2008-03-20 00:15:17 |
My Sister, The Bitch... Chapter 1
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ur mom is a hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo hobo |
| 2008-03-21 11:32:50 |
My Sister, The Bitch... Chapter 1
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very excellent... i came thrice... write morrrrrrrrrrrreeeee!!!!! |
| 2008-03-22 23:42:55 |
My Sister, The Bitch... Chapter 1
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It's very long, but length isn't a problem as long as it's well written and the story is good. My only complaint is that things became more and more convenient. With Mom and Dad in on the act, there's nothing at risk any more. Robbie seducing Ellen was a nice touch, but keeping that secret between them (and keeping Joe in the dark about everything) definitely would've kept the naughtiness up. 8/10, good work |
| 2008-03-23 11:48:40 |
My Sister, The Bitch... Chapter 1
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it was too long it is retared |
| 2008-03-24 00:11:21 |
My Sister, The Bitch... Chapter 1
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holy god 1345 comments must be a verry popular story but any way 100/10 |