| 2008-03-27 12:05:35 |
My Sister, The Bitch... Chapter 1
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i luved this story i read it over and over its so wonderful to bad i dont have a brother, that girl is really lucky |
| 2008-03-30 03:23:48 |
My Sister, The Bitch... Chapter 1
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Ahhhhhh, just blew another load. Damn good story mate. Gonna go find my girl now...... |
| 2008-04-01 04:03:14 |
My Sister, The Bitch... Chapter 1
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FUCKING SWEET BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ!!! 11/10 |
| 2008-04-01 23:25:13 |
My Sister, The Bitch... Chapter 1
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how can I get fucked |
| 2008-04-03 21:38:25 |
My Sister, The Bitch... Chapter 1
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I have read probably a hundred stories on this site, and this is only the second one I have felt compelled to comment on. And here's my comment. That was the best fucking story I have ever read, hands down. Keep writing these stories. I honestly think that you could be a professional writer if you wanted. The character development was fantastic, but very brief, and the scenes were original, complex, and descriptive. My only suggestion would be that you should have made this two seperate chapters. As great as this story was, it was a bit too long. I give this one an easy 10 out of 10. |