| 2007-11-10 02:25:47 |
My slutty wife Lori
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By now you should have enough material for half a dozen sequels. This is not a cheating story though as she had your consent all along. The sex described is a bit on the quick side. Tell her to slow down and go through what you have written so she can add details. Has she now for example got tattoos and body jewellery, one for each different guy? Perhaps interchangeable rings for each one. |
| 2006-01-16 13:24:57 |
A Masquerade Of Innocence
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continue the story from where you ended it you could make a good series out of it. 9/10 |
| 2006-01-16 14:12:16 |
A Masquerade Of Innocence
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love the twilight zone ending! |
| 2006-01-16 22:14:43 |
A Masquerade Of Innocence
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nice........ |
| 2006-01-25 03:58:07 |
A Masquerade Of Innocence
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dude you're fucked up. you cant get girls so you have to fucking rape them you're a sad cunt |