| 2007-09-06 23:35:38 |
A Masquerade Of Innocence
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loved the ending! |
| 2007-12-28 13:23:06 |
A Masquerade Of Innocence
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The ending was gr8,make a part two about how she comes back for more |
| 2008-02-29 04:37:10 |
A Masquerade Of Innocence
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I have to agree with the person who said this was sad. I mean the girl loved him, and he beats and rapes her. Why didn't he just ask her out on a date. Oh my God what a fucking loser, no shit; agree with that too. I mean girls do that, they flirt with others to see if the boy they really like likes them. Pathetic pervert beats his meat instead of asking the girl out. Boy needs to chase a bottle of xanax down with a bottle of vodka and rid this planet of shit like him. Pansy ass wimp. |
| 2006-01-16 09:17:58 |
The Game_(5)
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Not a bad story,but you are a bastard. |
| 2006-01-16 21:31:51 |
The Game_(5)
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Fucking hilarious dude... i loved it |