| 2006-10-22 01:34:27 |
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kathy i want to gangbang you with your german shepherd and my thick 8 inches... |
| 2006-10-24 21:59:49 |
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Wish I had a dog to lick my pussy. My first time was with my dog, and it was so hot!! He licked me so good! |
| 2006-11-02 07:25:58 |
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fucking hot kathy love to have been there |
| 2006-11-15 11:47:13 |
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If there's one thing anybody should be able to understand about writing porn its that it should build to a climax. Yours does, but it has cold spots. e.g paragraph 11. I would have explained that earlier in the story or left it out. Image your audience. Ok, I'm jerking away as I read, I'm getting hotter, now your telling me details about getting towels, etc. that's Cold spots. 6/10 |
| 2006-12-12 22:05:52 |
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More please, do you still fuck him!! |