| 2006-01-29 22:33:34 |
Mommy's naked love
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this story was writen as good as any story you would find in a major erotica magizine, keep writing, try to lay off the incest though |
| 2006-01-30 11:09:26 |
Mommy's naked love
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FUCKING RIGHT DOGGY!!! THAT WAS FUCKING AWESOME!!! THE BEST!!! SEND ME A COPY OF YOUR BOOK TOO AND I'LL BUY IT!!! |
| 2006-01-30 14:13:54 |
Mommy's naked love
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Great story - the best one yet. |
| 2006-01-30 16:56:06 |
Mommy's naked love
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A very well crafted story. You filled the characters out pretty well and set the story up nicely. Good descriptions. I do think that you overdid the cliches a bit in the sex scene (twitching twats, velvety rectums, and ambrosia all sound kind of like the script from a 1-900 service). Keep writing. |
| 2006-01-30 21:15:01 |
Mommy's naked love
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i wish i was ray it may of took a long time to read butt it was great 10/10 |