| 2006-02-08 04:08:35 |
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Great freakin story, sweetmom. I wish you were my mom so I could have screwed your brains out nightly! Sweet australian lovebitch! Oh, & it wasnt too long. It was good for multiple cumbacks if you know what I mean! 10/10 |
| 2006-02-08 05:07:25 |
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good storie...lil long but i still liked it.;. |
| 2006-02-09 20:17:59 |
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This has got to be the most well written story on this site. The extensive vocabulary and playout of the story proves that much. Knowing how to involve the information with out making it sound like a documentary is also a skill, some writers genually lack, that you used gracefully. Your ability to intertwine each indevidual's story so that we know both side keeps the piece compelling and fresh. Im looing forward to reading more literature of this calibur. Best of luck in writing the second title (If there is one, you wrapped this one up pretty thouroughly.) |
| 2006-02-13 15:43:10 |
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This is in my mind the best story on this site good job 10/10! |
| 2006-02-14 15:57:46 |
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Anyone who says this is author sucks is a fucking ass hole who can't se fine art if it bit them in the face, im not one to normaly read/comment on these erotic stories but this one is what all of them should be like, good vocab a real sence of knowing for the characters i hpoe you right more 10/10 PS: if you say its to long then it means you read it and probly got an erection so fuck you, you dumb ass piece of shit |