2007-01-02 02:07:58 |
The director of Buenos-Aries
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You're grammar is so bad it makes it hard to read but the story itself is fucking awesome. I came before I even finished reading it! |
2007-12-11 16:11:19 |
The director of Buenos-Aries
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I like how dirty you are ;) |
2008-01-20 23:22:57 |
The director of Buenos-Aries
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This is really hot - I would love to be dominated like this! |
2006-02-20 22:05:14 |
Breakdown_(3)
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Congratulations on getting your first story out, great imagination. It would be a more enjoyable read though if you check spelling and grammar. |
2006-02-20 23:21:15 |
Breakdown_(3)
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not bad not bad |