| 2006-02-21 22:51:12 |
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Punctuation is your friend!!!!!!!!!!! |
| 2006-02-22 00:11:33 |
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If that was your first story i sure hope that you write another one soon.I really enjoyed this one and could not stop until i finished it. |
| 2007-04-22 15:49:49 |
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it was an OK story, just u got the names mixed up, A LOT, in the end there was no David like there was in the beginning. |
| 2007-06-04 05:00:25 |
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you have a deep imagination ,a female must have an experience to imagine as such |
| 2007-06-04 15:24:48 |
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The story was one of the best I have read. Please write more soon. |