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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-01-24 10:05:27 | Never Wanted Her So Bad | too short dude...but overall the story is good 6/10 |
| 2006-01-26 00:59:07 | Never Wanted Her So Bad | you should make a more thourough beginning, tell us what your relationship is with allie, is this a one-nighter, or a serious relationship? Did you have your date to the movies planned for a week, or did you just decide to go to a movie that night? This kind of information is always good. Also, think about going into further detail when they are fucking. Nice spelling and grammer though. |
| 2007-02-02 12:37:21 | Never Wanted Her So Bad | Not bad, but too short. Needs more descriptions all the way from beginning to end... |
| 2007-04-25 14:49:30 | Never Wanted Her So Bad | LONGER! |
| 2006-01-24 16:37:39 | UNFINISHED STORY | i cant say im a supporter of rape !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |