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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-02-21 11:26:56 | Daughter's prison - part 3 | Get dictionary, stupid. It's a fiction story. |
| 2005-02-26 15:30:36 | Daughter's prison - part 3 | Excellently concieved, plotted, and executed FICTIONAL incest/preg/noncon sex story! Brava to the author! Please don't be discouraged by the morons who (a) don't know what fiction means and/or (b) think fictional incest has something to do with real incest and/or (c) only want stroke material. |
| 2005-03-05 08:24:52 | Daughter's prison - part 3 | this story was very well written..........im glad that she figured out a way to get him out of her life...........though she should have gone the the cops earlier................it really wasent a sexy story...........and definetly DIDENT get me off.........but bravo to the writer.........if you could add on to that story with about 200 pages of what she did after hope was born im sure that it would be published and become a bestseller........great job.............RAPISTS WILL DIE BY MY HAND AND ROT IN HELL FOR ALL ETERNITY |
| 2005-03-08 18:58:33 | Daughter's prison - part 3 | just read this again after quite a while and it got me cumming just as hard as before |
| 2005-04-13 18:58:48 | Daughter's prison - part 3 | Good job! I enjoyed a lot. Don't pay any attention to the people that criticized your story. I do have one minor problem with a section of the story...At one point you switched it from a first person to a third person. "I was dimly aware of the lewd, wet squelching noises as his huge monstrous cockhead mashed again and again into the very end of her pussy, his hips were twisting in a cork-screw motion as he strove to drill his truncheon deeper into my loins." at the very end of HER pussy. Other than that, good job. The pther gramatical errors weren't that bad. |