| 2006-01-30 21:16:11 |
Mom"s sex lessons
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that was the worst written story ever!!! |
| 2006-01-30 22:54:13 |
Mom"s sex lessons
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dont listen to them. it was a great beginner story. tok kinda long to get to the good stuff but still wasnt bad. gave it an 8/10. |
| 2006-01-31 18:57:29 |
Mom"s sex lessons
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let me be very blunt. a males sex drive "blooms" at around 11 or 12. on occasions it blooms around 6 as in my case. if you are going to write get it right. it was written with what appears to be mastery of vocabulary but amateur skills in ordering. work on that before you continue to write |
| 2006-02-01 01:55:58 |
Mom"s sex lessons
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pretty good for a first time 5/10 |
| 2006-02-08 01:09:04 |
Mom"s sex lessons
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simply an asshole story |