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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-10-20 12:01:02 | The girl on the bus - Part 1 | good skills i thought.. |
| 2007-06-26 16:57:29 | The girl on the bus - Part 1 | Not a bad story--especially as bad as stated by some comments. It reminds me of what a guy goes through when he hires a prostitute. It's just that you didn't have to pay her. If you rewrite, make it longer and especially in the foreplay. I find that both parties get more out of teh fucking if there is between 20-30 minutes of foreplay. Women need it more than the man in most cases unless he can pump, pump, and pump some more. I can't, I'm too quick. Gave this story a 5/10. |
| 2006-03-23 08:55:29 | Sweet Dina | good story but you need to write better.....much better |
| 2006-03-23 09:26:16 | Sweet Dina | You can't write im afraid. Great story but too many mistakes.2/10 |
| 2006-03-23 10:14:01 | Sweet Dina | good story but you need to seperate the dialoge and correct your grammer...and spelling. |