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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-02-25 13:38:22 | Rape - Her Story | wow...hey if you like it why not right? I'm a fan of dark fiction, I'm sorry let me rephrase, I'm a fan of GOOD dark fiction. This, in my opinion, was way longer than it needed to be. Especially, the introduction when you keep repeating the same damn paragraph and sentences over and over again. You sounded like a rage against the machine song. It's like on the Charlie Brown cartoons when the teacher talks, it's just "WAH WAH WAH WAH...WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH. WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH WAH WA. Ok? You are a great writer dude! I mean that! A better writer than me more than likely. You just need to cut some of the fat off of it is all. Other than the useless length it was well written and I'm glad I stumbled upon this one :) |
| 2006-02-25 19:33:38 | Rape - Her Story | i wasted 20 mins of my life reading this shit. now i want 2 rape u. |
| 2006-02-25 21:59:49 | Rape - Her Story | You certainly have a talent for writing and I do hope you continue with it. Take this for what it is worth after all it is only one person’s point of view. . I felt this story was far too long for so little information. The lack of descriptive information leading to and during her torment basically left me without feeling for her one way or the other. Along with this, the amount of repetition was daunting, I found myself loosing interest before really getting started. Finally, It’s hard for me to believe a person would make a long automobile drive alone, yet could not pull to the side of the road in full daylight, at 2 o’clock in the afternoon. |
| 2006-05-08 11:03:59 | Rape - Her Story | well damm long too long! i read it for 5 minutes and i lose interest already!! |
| 2006-05-14 22:37:30 | Rape - Her Story | u must b da most retarded peice of shit on earth!!! wot da fuck were u thinking about whn u were writing this. it iz soooo f***ed up dat theres no fuckin point....................i'... rather waste my time shitting in da toilet then reading this bull shit. |