| 2006-02-14 11:10:27 |
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Good story but rather rushed a bit. I am wondering, however, just how old you were at the time. your story says 18 in the earlier paragraph but 17 later in the story. Details, man, details. |
| 2006-02-23 14:32:54 |
Mother shows son the way
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wheres the anal bro thats wut i came for |
| 2006-02-26 15:08:08 |
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A good and very well written story. You started of nicely with just the right amount of details but then you really rushed into it. It would have been great if it was a bit longer and more detailed. |
| 2006-03-01 23:54:04 |
Mother shows son the way
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what no anal you need it in tha ass LOL |
| 2006-03-02 20:48:57 |
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not long enough no anal or teen female and not really a dark fantasy either |