| 2006-02-10 07:52:44 |
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Not bad, puzzled by when Louise and Rob married but overall pretty good.
What a bitch Suzie must be, nicking all Louise's fun!! |
| 2006-02-11 04:35:56 |
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Reference to wife and where it said not had any cum since this morning makes me feel it is not an original story, but has been changed! |
| 2006-02-11 15:08:44 |
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(Author's comment) - Whoops - sorry about the "wife" reference - this section was originally written as part of my earlier story about Susie (Hotel part 1 - Under the Table), and referred to the married couple Don & Polly. But I took it out because that story was already a bit long - then clearly didn't proof-read it properly when moving it to this one... |
| 2006-02-14 05:48:35 |
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to the comment about no cum since this morning.
just becvause she says that doesnt mean its not an original story. main character is suise, the other chaacters do have lives. and just because what happened in the mornign isnt posted doesnt m3ean it didnt happen. i kinda liked it where it showed that the non main chars actually had lives!
great sotry, 10/10 |
| 2006-02-16 14:59:00 |
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keepitup
good story with lots of nasty sex
thank
you |