| 2006-02-06 16:22:08 |
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um, i thought it was ok, but i dont think that its a true story. also, use a spellcheck.... it'll help your writing a lot |
| 2006-02-06 20:26:11 |
our lust at grandparents home one for the records
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dude, your an idiot, you almost came when you touched her, yet you had that long of sex. dumbass, you would cum as soon as you stuck it in her. |
| 2006-02-07 07:45:36 |
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IFORGIVE YOUR SPELLING SINCE OUR SCHOOLS DO NOT TEACH READING, WRITING AND ARITHMATICS ANY MORE. I BET YOU COULD WRITE A WONDERFUL STORY ABOUT "BALCK HISTORY NONTH" OR SOME OTHER IMPORTANT THING THEY TEACH TODAY. -- HOWEVER, YOUR STORY NEEDS MORE DETAIL AND MORE DESCRIPTIONS OF FEELINGS. KEEP WRITING BUT INVEST IN A WORD PROCESSOR WITH A SPELLING CHECKER. TU HUNG LO |
| 2006-02-07 19:24:43 |
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if a girl could suck a dick like this story does, i would blow my load in her mouth in two seconds. no way this is a true story |
| 2006-02-08 12:18:29 |
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Could someone PLEASE explain what the hell this excerpt means? "yeh i dont ming love less cooking for me tonight". Sorry, but the grammar just turned me off. Spell check the story before submitting another. |