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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-02-11 15:03:46 | football party | do you realize that god invented double spacing/paragraphs? and winchester rifles |
| 2006-02-11 18:07:07 | football party | once I got stuck in my zipper, it was awful there was blood and skin and . . . I bring this up because even that was better than reading this pre-adolescent mess of a story. |
| 2006-02-19 13:23:10 | football party | now i dont no much about this mans mind but a true story of a WIFE wrote by a man hmmm me smells the sent of BULLSHIT all over it |
| 2006-06-26 11:39:19 | football party | Don't lie. This story is really about your mom. I watched that game,that sucked too. |
| 2006-02-09 17:33:45 | Megan 1 | This must be a first effort at writing. I gv u 7 for effort. There is nothing wrong about fucking a woman who's on the rag, for one thing they're not fertile, for another, she wouldn't have been where she was if she didn't want the big one. Your spelling and punctuation need work, and the arrangement in your sentences, also. Keep writing, you've a good story line. r |