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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-02-11 17:36:02 | The woman in me Pt. 2 | OMG |
| 2006-02-11 19:36:38 | The woman in me Pt. 2 | Dude, learn to write. Writing is a discipline. So realize that discipline and write an idea to its logical conclusion. U jump around so much that it,s hard to keep track of what's going on. I like the idea, that you're reallly horny, but take a few more words and describe what it feels like to get a cock up your bum. what his mouth on your cock felt to you. Just because you cummed, doesn't mean you're satisfied. A lot more description is needed. rudbored one ps u got 3 |
| 2006-02-14 05:10:09 | The woman in me Pt. 2 | salut |
| 2006-02-20 17:32:34 | Bartending during spring break | Shave cream or whipped cream. Needs more connecting transition. Good for the first. Now finish it |
| 2006-02-09 19:13:19 | My Indoctrination | A fine story as it progressed. I didn't care for the early years when the boy was far too young to be a sex object, but things perked up considerably as he reached puberty. The Dick Slapper liked it and gives it 9/10. |