| 2006-02-28 05:33:58 |
Our Tenth Anniversary
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shows a lot of promise but waaaaayy too short, should have had at least one more sex scene that night, and nothing in the morning?!?! come on! write a follow up. 8/10 |
| 2006-11-23 01:32:39 |
Journey
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absolutley boring to say the least, all fantasy and not possible truth to any of the action |
| 2006-02-10 17:15:13 |
picking up Serena
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nice shit man |
| 2006-02-10 19:18:51 |
picking up Serena
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that was a cool story |
| 2006-02-11 21:25:51 |
picking up Serena
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That was the best written erotica I have read here yet - including the typos! Well done. This is the only story I have commented on... |