| 2006-02-13 00:10:27 |
picking up Serena
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It's rare that I post comments on stories, but forthis one I will make the exception. IF the you are 18 and "Nevalaid," I'd say you either read way to much porn or have a very concise imagination. Suspension of disbelief is the one thing you will see in my comments evrytime, and you are almost there. Even if it is all fiction, a.k.a. bullshit you still need to convince these horny jackoff bandits that banging their balls with their fists is first and foremost. You don't want them stopping to think that your cock probably isn't really nine inches long, or that it might really be. All that technical stuff aside, I read a lot of porn and not much of the lierotica here or anywhere else gets my pecker that hard. Istill think at the turning point, David should have raped her ass! |