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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-02-18 16:02:57 | american slut in Paris [revised] | pleas more my pussy aches |
| 2006-02-19 00:06:07 | american slut in Paris [revised] | i really liked this story it was great i would like to here more |
| 2006-02-19 09:38:43 | american slut in Paris [revised] | I really liked this one, other than a few small inconsistancies, it was a turn on. She seems a bit fast for her age (whichis fine) but we do not know why. The kind of families that can afford trips to paris usually do not let their 15 yo daughters smoke. I would probably have let Rover go last if I was adding a bestiality factor. I doubt even frogs would want sloppy seconds after a great dane. Also, describe, describe. describe, the more visuals, the better. I like the idea of a series, but you write the story you want. Keep writing. |
| 2006-02-19 11:26:27 | american slut in Paris [revised] | Well Jess, You need to revise some more...there is a lot more to this story you could have went into. So don't be in a hurry to get your story out...good start....8/10 |
| 2006-02-19 21:05:58 | american slut in Paris [revised] | damn dirty french people had a gangbang with an american slut. story could have went into greater detail after the the and the blonde owner were finished |