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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-02-19 20:44:00 | Mike's Sleepover | Man, you are in urgent need of grammar lessons if you want to call yourself a writer. You need to learn about commas, periods, question marks and apostrophes --- and learn where to put them The way you write now it seems like one never-ending sentence. The story in itself is pretty good, though. 6/10. |
| 2006-02-19 21:49:48 | Mike's Sleepover | Dude, good story. hurry ur ass up with part 2!! |
| 2006-02-19 23:10:11 | Mike's Sleepover | good. make sure you put he and she in the correct places and it's from not form. |
| 2006-02-20 02:40:12 | Mike's Sleepover | good story but u need to fix some grammer errors |
| 2006-02-20 04:03:42 | Mike's Sleepover | it made me a little wet |