| 2006-02-20 12:59:24 |
Mike's Sleepover
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bad grammer, good story, dont use incest for the next one |
| 2006-02-20 14:45:51 |
Mike's Sleepover
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good story but if you don't use incest 'then at least have sister tease brother and add voyuerism and how about girls playing spin-the bottle and the loser has to go into the brothers room and jack him off while the others watch or one of the girls catch brother jacking off |
| 2006-02-20 16:12:56 |
Mike's Sleepover
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i couldn't even stand to finish it because of all the typos. proofread next time |
| 2006-02-20 16:43:24 |
Mike's Sleepover
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Incest is dirty |
| 2006-02-20 17:15:40 |
Mike's Sleepover
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Reader ure gay |