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Comments from READER
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| 2006-04-09 04:53:41 | - I loved the fact that you have reached all levels of sex including the gay part which I found to be interesting! Gawd keep up the good work!!!!!!! 10/10 |
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| 2007-03-23 17:39:44 | neil as gay fucked up shit i dont like the gay part but the rest was asome just a fistin the pussy or ass is missing 9/10 |
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| 2007-09-19 13:07:44 | loved it. 20/10, A+++++. just 1 question, why did "Charles" suddenly change to "Chuck"? | |
| 2006-03-04 17:56:27 | girls of my life | Awsome story mint for your first time PART 2 defo |
| 2006-03-04 21:35:29 | girls of my life | Slow down. write the story, proof it, then put it away for a day or two. read it again, reproof, repeat. You should do all of the set-up in Word or WP. When you really feel good about it, then post it. no 16 yo is nothing but muscle. lay off the superfluous statistical descriptions and make us see the charactors. The story is a tough read as is, once you fix the structural stuff it should be a lot better. Keep trying. |