| 2006-03-05 23:33:24 |
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dart the bitch, there is no honor among thieves! |
| 2006-03-05 23:57:40 |
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Not Enough Plot In This One |
| 2006-03-06 19:25:55 |
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i don't trust her either, stick her ass .....to |
| 2006-03-07 14:45:10 |
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great story
keep that shit coming
i love them all |
| 2006-03-08 02:49:39 |
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If you are really serious about taking these stories to a publisher then you're most definatley going to have to add some more polt, but so far this has been the most ecellent story on this site. Not exactly my cup of tea but the story overrides it. keep it up. |