2006-03-07 04:10:26 |
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hehe, love the story,
brings to point that power corrupts, but absolute powers kinda cool. i think i woudl go the same way that he is. either that or have them some how go to some private island of mine .... |
2006-03-12 16:14:42 |
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your stories blow all others ive read out of the water, keep writing! |
2006-03-15 23:37:47 |
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keepitup
It is book material but must be much longer
Thank you |
2006-08-16 22:29:50 |
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Man that totally rocked You need to rit more |
2007-06-08 11:28:53 |
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Ok it is a good story I just dont really like the turn of evil in it but its a Great story really although I would say this particular chapter caters to a certain type of person who is more into S&M |