| 2007-11-30 19:31:48 |
Innocent Amber Gets Raped
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Ok, this really, really sucked. There was almost no sex in it at all. It should have way more sex. It was moderately well written at least (spelling and grammar wise). horrible. 2/10 |
| 2007-12-27 08:09:55 |
Innocent Amber Gets Raped
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this story was quite good. It had the potential to be excellent. Just a little more detail needed when he actually fucked her. thanks for giving me plenty of dreams. 6/10 |
| 2008-01-02 00:23:37 |
Innocent Amber Gets Raped
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The details of the intercourse isn't what this story is about. The total and compleate loss of control, the momentary glimmer of hope given only to be taken away is what is erotic about this story. aside from that details are just fluff |
| 2008-01-19 22:37:39 |
Innocent Amber Gets Raped
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Sounds hot.... i give it an 8. |
| 2008-01-22 17:55:03 |
Innocent Amber Gets Raped
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sexsexsexsexsexsexsexsexsex... |