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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-03-17 22:31:56 | Chrissy, my one true friend | for the readers of this story how want to know about the fish . i say go fuck a fish because this is a site for sex no fucking fish you fags. and to the reader on the second page who said"What about the fish, man? never mind the dumb-ass story with your sister. the fish is the main item of interest" who should not be such a dum-ass you little wussy prick go fuck a fish and shut the fuck up you virgin ps you live in you parents basement... dont you? yah you do |
| 2006-03-17 23:25:38 | Chrissy, my one true friend | wasnt da chrissy a virgin? |
| 2006-03-17 23:48:08 | Chrissy, my one true friend | yeah what happend to the fish eh?? |
| 2006-03-18 18:05:58 | Chrissy, my one true friend | yes, da chrissy wasn't a virgin. That's kinda what the pause was for, but I didn't want to get into the details of him breaking her hymen cause it seems overused. |
| 2006-03-18 21:27:23 | Chrissy, my one true friend | For all of you who would like to know about the fish, it is revealed at the end. And to the author, not too bad, but spell check would be a good tool, and having someone proof read can help with stopping run-on sentances. One last thing. Try breaking up the paragraphs some. It makes it easier to read, and the story flows better when you seperate the spoken words from the middle of a paragraph. But other than that, very good story. |