| 2006-12-20 23:25:01 |
Sure bet
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story with so many possibilities!!! How can you cut it off so fast? |
| 2006-12-20 23:42:23 |
Sure bet
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nice one, keep on writing more. |
| 2006-12-21 03:09:45 |
Sure bet
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what the hell it got me really hard. i would like to read the rest plz. |
| 2006-12-21 05:36:22 |
Sure bet
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Bad grammar, bad writing style, terrible story flow and lousy content equals: 2/10 |
| 2006-12-21 20:38:00 |
Sure bet
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To the 2 readers with negative comments what have you wrote? It's easy to judge others put up or shut up and be man enough to put your name on your comments........ST |