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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-12-22 00:17:01 | Sure bet | story was awesome.. i wished it was longer with more sex detail... can't wait for the next days... please make them LONGER!! good work though 10 |
| 2006-12-22 12:02:41 | Sure bet | fair story.can't wait for details of the next 4 days. 8/10 |
| 2006-12-23 05:32:51 | Sure bet | Terrible grammar; lousy punctuation (or rather no punctuation when it was needed); and a silly story line combine to make it a waste of time. 2/10 |
| 2006-12-23 16:55:52 | Sure bet | Listen Scott T. Don't start sucking your thumb and begin to pout when somebody criticizes your writing. Your writing is not very good; your grammar is horrible. But you should be man enough to accept criticism. I'm the Dick Slapper and I don't pick on anybody to be mean. I criticize and congratulate writers, depending on their style and content. By the way, in my work-a-day life I'm a newspaper journalist. Have been one for 35 years and, believe me, I know the difference between bad, fair, good and excellent writing. |
| 2006-12-23 20:11:04 | Sure bet | Reader just because you have swept floors at a paper for 35 years or maybe you have been a paper boy for that long I dont know. You can say what you want but do not put down others ok for trying to write something. I didn't know you had to be a novilist to write on here. ST |