| 2006-03-20 11:23:41 |
Friday Night Lights
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10/10 >.> not that it turns me on or anything.. im.. a virgin? =) |
| 2006-03-25 22:04:28 |
Friday Night Lights
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Good basis, and classy, but no action. Also, learn when to use commas and periods. |
| 2006-03-28 22:18:53 |
Friday Night Lights
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Nah,, short but quiet interesting.. try " harder " next time! |
| 2006-04-19 15:55:11 |
Friday Night Lights
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You did better than most on this. You have said there is more to come I will be looking for it. |
| 2006-03-25 05:27:24 |
Texas dildo masscare (part2of4)
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work on your damn grammar and spelling...perhaps you just need to stop wanking it while you're trying to write..... and skip the shitty descriptions on the girls ...otherwise...great imagination..i love the porridge-like substance that rises and expands...hotness! >.< wouldn't YOU love to have that up your ass |