| 2006-03-25 07:07:48 |
An Ace with Two Queens Pt. 1
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Very Good |
| 2006-03-26 05:27:12 |
An Ace with Two Queens Pt. 1
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Sorry, but it's sort of common, and very lacking in detail. Good start though, if you keep on writing. Writling is work and you'll do well if you do it. 5/10 |
| 2006-03-27 01:36:17 |
An Ace with Two Queens Pt. 1
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this whole thing stinks.how stupid ccan you rbe. |
| 2006-03-27 23:51:11 |
An Ace with Two Queens Pt. 1
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no fucking way this is a true story |
| 2006-03-28 07:09:34 |
An Ace with Two Queens Pt. 1
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sounds like this dude was watching a porno movie and describing it at the same time.....bad, bad, bad... |