| 2006-03-28 20:27:13 |
Popping my sister's cherry
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what a dumbass....... |
| 2006-03-28 22:07:22 |
Popping my sister's cherry
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Why don't you piss and moan bastards that only bad mouth writer's attempts put your big literary intellect on the line and fucking write something fucking better! God damn! All you assholes do is piss and moan, whine and complain, cry and bitch like a bunch of mother fucking old school marms! Write something better or SHUT THE FUCK UP GOD DAMN IT!!! |
| 2006-03-29 00:02:35 |
Popping my sister's cherry
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The problem i see with this story is that it lacks most detail and does not have much of a beginning or ending. That and most women don't orgasm every time let alone their first time with someone else completely inexperienced. |
| 2006-03-29 00:10:48 |
Popping my sister's cherry
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One thing for sure THE GUY IN THE STORY KNOWS NOTHING ABOUT FUCKING A VIRGIN oH EXCUSE ME THAT SHOULD READ THE WRITER OF THE STORY HAS NEVER FUCKED A VIRGIN ever had a stubborn hymen one of them tough ones She'll bleed and cry for a while doubtful if she reach a climax after that but fiction is one thing but even fiction sounds better if it has some true facts |
| 2006-03-29 21:42:44 |
Popping my sister's cherry
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whouver wrote this can't spell at all and the story suked |