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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-03-05 17:23:15 | Popping my sister's cherry | wasted minutes of my life |
| 2006-03-23 10:57:47 | Allie at College | the ending suck like hell |
| 2006-03-23 14:49:09 | Allie at College | Very limp, soft beginning and even flopier at the end. |
| 2006-03-24 06:08:19 | Allie at College | it has promise if you slow down th action |
| 2006-03-24 15:27:24 | Allie at College | The Goody-Two Shoes line of stories was really good, and this is just generic action. Don't tell us about the fact that she sucked a guy off, show it with vivid words. You need to pay more attention to detail and make well developed characters like GTS. That was one of my favorite stories on this site, and this is just a bit...lacking. -Lucius |