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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-03-25 22:39:43 | The Xmas Jockey | bunghole? lol |
| 2006-03-23 19:52:51 | Rebel Holiday | I didn't care for this story line. A little too slow, too boring. 4/10 |
| 2006-03-24 05:57:55 | Rebel Holiday | what a fucked up, poorly written piece. 3/10 |
| 2006-03-24 17:06:03 | Rebel Holiday | Can I ask what is actually wrong ? In intelligent words. Is it because it does not contain usual steroetyped sex? No incest? No "beg for it bitch" ? I tried to write a story my way. I tried to keep the grammar correct, parapgraphs too. I only started to write because I read some top rated stories and felt i could write too. If other renowened writers in here feel i should quit, then fine. I have misunderstood and will not write again. But I find it hard to take criticisms from anonymous "readers". Best regards |
| 2006-03-25 15:10:50 | Rebel Holiday | I found this a refreshing change. well written keep writing |