| 2006-04-01 00:37:41 |
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good story, |
| 2006-04-01 06:05:29 |
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Good story. I cummed three times while reading it!
Keep it up.
I'll give you a 10/10 on this. But, I do believe that there still is some need for improvement.
I know that 10/10 is too high for this story, but I'll still give you a 10/10...Just for the heck of it!
Anyways, keep writing...And keep improving! |
| 2006-04-02 14:39:05 |
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Hi I`m Kathy 25, NYC. Loved your story made very horny. Oh, I`m a model. |
| 2006-04-02 16:35:37 |
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that was could i cummed all over the computer sceen kep it up mate |
| 2006-04-07 05:59:17 |
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Thanks for the comments, ill try and act on them. Thanks again for reading it |