| 2006-04-08 08:24:38 |
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superb stuff...although the fucking at the end is a bit short...but keep it up! |
| 2006-04-22 23:37:57 |
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good storyline
needs more stuff
make it longer
and more romantic
but not mushy |
| 2006-05-06 12:09:18 |
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Aww, that was very sweet :D
nicely writen :D |
| 2006-05-15 01:20:46 |
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story sucked ballz lmao |
| 2006-05-20 14:06:01 |
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it wus ok.....ill give it like a 7.8/10 |